For me it's too adjectival to register ("Red shapes and white lines on the sun bleached blue"), and not timed ... The greatest pleasure in Lion Rampant lies in Carter Wilson's "Instance of Atavism ...
And able. Now real fruit is borne--the Lion Rampant, 32 pages of literary magazine. Which is not to say that publishers will come running excitedly to Winthrop to sign up the freshly-discovered ...